Archive for the 'Uni' Category

20
Feb
10

Black Jacket (Visual Writing, Chase Sequence)

Heart racing.

Blood dripping

Men chasing.

Clothing ripped

Street lights beaming

Shadows stretching

Black jacket man on the run.

Scuffling shoes,

Snap decision.

Badly timed.

Head lights dazzle.

Tires screaching

Sheilding eyes.

Sudden hault

Impatient horns

Angry shouts

Breathing hard

Men chasing.

Turning.

Facing.

“There he is”

“He’s in the road”

Stairs ahead.

Bridge above.

Black jacket surges on.

Black jacket man.

Heart racing.

Scuffling shoes on metal steps.

Looking.

Leeping.

Fingers grasping.

Pulling up onto the ledge.

Wind howling.

Chasers scowling.

Out of reach black Jacket stands.

Climbing slowly.

Chasers follow.

Cold and hollow, black jacket waits.

Standing.

Waiting.

Hesitating.

All three upon the roof top stand.

Arms raising.

Speaking softly.

Arms out stretched.

“Forgive me please”

Leaning backwards.

Men run forward.

Black jacket falls.

The men look over

Black jacket falls

Eyes of horror

Black jacket.

Black jacket

Red stains.

Cracked tarmac

Crimson blood

Cracked skull

Life ending

People screaming

Tears streaming

Cars gather

Traffic haults.

Black jacket lifeless

Black jack young

Black jacket

Black jacket

Black jacket gone

09
Feb
10

DSA/Student Support/Dissertation

Okay so today I booked myself an apointment with learning support for help with planning my dissertation, the better late than never phrase springs to mind.

I’m writing the George Carlin, Too Hip For This Room, biopic now atlast! Since I nailed the presetation on the day an got an average pass for it. That delightful week or so of awkwardness in the house as one friend couldn’t speak to another.

The Dakota Project was and is a great (to me) British horror concept although it does need some work to fully achieve its potential, and will one day submitted to a production company.

My dissertation is currently virtually non-existant, mainly because I spent months getting an idea researching, then changing to something else, rather than sit on my hands, waiting for the magic eureka moment. I know the rough subject area and will begin researching extensively after my meeting on Monday (25th) at 1:30 with the Learning Support Team.

If I can get 10 more pages of Carlin done today I’ll be doing well.

Well I don’t wanna be bogged down in blog town so that’s it for now.

28
Jan
10

Career Objective

Career objective:

To get a tv series or radio series comissioned.

To get a tefl qualification, to see more of the world.

Write a sucessful film either horror or romance.

26
Nov
09

Portmanteau

Portmanteau as a device to tell multiple views of the same story or same event, sometimes used to tell several seperate stories that inform and complete the overall narative.

Possibility of telling biopic with portmanteau narrative structure telling for example 5 key events in Carlin’s life.

Night on Earth

Priest taxi driver scene, fantastic.

Spider.

The Science of Sleep.

Talking To A Stranger, Richard Hopkins Fragmented Dialogue.

It’s A Wonderful Life

Wild Strawberries

A Matter of Life and Death

19
Nov
09

Too Hip For This Room

“Too Hip For This Room”

A George Carlin Biopic

Conceived, Curley’s Hotel, Rockaway Beach, NY August, 1936, nine
months later born George Denis Patrick Carlin May 12, 1937. His
parents rocky relationship reaches its peak and in July of 1937 leads
to his mother escaping down a fire escape with George and his brother
Patrick in toe they meet with Uncle Tom and escape in his car and are
now refugees at Peg Willets’ farm in the Catskills and finally in 1937
his parents become legally separated, Carlin remember few details
about his father who subsequently dies in 1945. One of George’s
earliest memories is the family sitting around the radio in the living
room listening a partial eclipse of the sun and it is at this time he
is told the family motto “Someday We’ll all have hats”, something
George will come to reference later on in his career as a stand up
comedian.

In 1941 he moves to 519 West 121st street, NYC and stays for 25 years,
its here that he experiences many firsts including sex, drugs, rhythm
and blues.

George’s mother taught him a dance craze of the 1930′s called “The Big
Apple”, which she would later coax him to show to her work colleagues,
its at this young age he realises that doing something for people
pleased them and gained some level of approval, this lead to his
mother teaching him imitations of people such as May West and Johnny
The Philp Mars Midget.

On his own as he grew up through years 6 to 10 learned that he could
in his own words “gain approval, attention, applause, approbation, all
these A’s I never got in school”.

In a fifth grade class he is asked to write an autobiography detailing
what he wants to be and its at this stage he identifies “comedian” as
one of his career paths, aware that he likes attention and likes the
process of standing up in front of people to entertain them, something
he attributes to the lack of father figure in his life and his mother
absence at work all day. Carlin develops a strong desire to emulate
his childhood hero from the movies. comedian Danny Kaye, growing up at
the tail end of the golden age of the radio and just before the golden
age of television comedians he makes comedy paramount in his life,
influenced by:

Fibber McGee and Molly, Amos and Andy, Charlie McCarthy and Edgar
Bergen, Fred Allen, The Bob Hope Show, Bing Crosby and several Radio
Sit Coms such as “Date With Judy” and magazines such as “Thousand
Jokes” and “Ballyhoo”, “panic comics” and “mad comics”

George dropping out of school.

With radio buddy, Jack Burns, flees Texas for Hollywood to pursue
nightclub career as comedy team, Burns & Carlin. Leave with $300. and
brand-new Dodge Dart Pioneer.

Then it will talk about how Carlin started his solo career but got
stuck in the club scene and wanted to break out and how he literally
forced his final show by laying on the floor and describing the
ceiling and they slowly faded out the lights on him that day, then he
got his big break on the college circuit something he’d wanted to do
for a long time and that shot him to the big time

“As America entered the Magic Decade, I was leading a double life …
My affection for pot continued and my disregard for standard values
increased, but they lagged behind my need to succeed. The Playboy
Club, Merv Griffin, Ed Sullivan and the Copacabana were all part of a
path I found uncomfortable but necessary during the early 1960s. But
as the decade churned along and the country changed, I did too.
Despite working in ‘establishment’ settings, as a veteran malcontent I
found myself hanging out in coffee houses and folk clubs with others
who were out-of-step people who fell somewhere between beatnik and
hippie. Hair got longer, clothes got stranger, music got better. It
became more of a strain for me to work for straight audiences. I took
acid and mescaline. My sense of being on the outside intensified. I
changed.” Again with Larry Wilde he elaborated, “I began to change in
sixty-nine, seventy … That’s when I began to experiment with acid. I
had been a pot smoker most of my life … what the acid did was to
spring me past the frontier, to artificially get me to the next step
… [LSD] pushed me over to see that ‘Hey, I’m wasting my time with
these people, I don’t really like them, I’m sort of entertaining the
enemy. They’re kind of a safe, play it safe, middle-class audience and
I’m playing it safe with them – and I feel differently inside, let me
get it out of me!”

Copa This was evident to the wealthy, white bread crowd at The
Copacabana, New York’s posh, mobster run nightclub. Carlin had
successfully played the venue in the past, but the guilt and
dissatisfaction eating away at him, no longer allowed him to put on
the Scott McClellan face of “I believe everything I’m saying and I’m
happy to be here.” The Copa was the place to record high-energy
medleys of white America’s favorite standards for every recording
artist from Paul Anka to Jackie Wilson, but in 1969, Carlin could no
longer muster it. “I was straining at the leash … I knew I didn’t
belong in that place,” Carlin said in Comedy at the Edge. He expressed
his pain and dismay to the crowd over the course of the two-week
engagement, “These places went out of style twenty years ago. I see
Don Ameche dance past me one more time, I’m getting the fuck out of
here.” In the same book Zoglin explains that for Carlin it was
liberating: ‘The Copa let him play out his engagement but at the end
of his last show gave him a pointed send-off. “It was very artistic,
very cinematic,” Carlin recalls.

“Toward the end of my act, they slowly turned my light off. Instead of the usual thing where the band plays you off, they just brought the light down slowly. And they took the sound down at the same time. Very dramatic. It was almost sweet in a way. And I knew I was free.”

14
Nov
09

Too Hip For This Room

“Too Hip For This Room”

A George Carlin Biopic

From his conception at Curley’s hotel on Rockaway beach.

To his mother escaping down a fire escape with George and his brother patrick in toe.

George recieving the tape recorder and his love for Danny Kaye.

George dropping out of school.

With radio buddy, Jack Burns, flees Texas for Hollywood to pursue nightclub career as comedy team, Burns & Carlin. Leave with $300. and brand-new Dodge Dart Pioneer.

09
Nov
09

Victims of Circumstance

Victims of Circumstance

When a group of strangers descovers that they were infact in the right place at the right time a mysterious investigation reveals a figure in their dreams had led them to their fate.

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When a group of unconnected strangers begin having recurring dreams involving a mysterious man showing them glimpses of the future they find themselves bound together on a quest to reveal his identity and why he has led them to London to witness a car crash.

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Martha and Francis Evans, a retired art critic and a real estate agent from Kent.

Freidrich Kreinhopper a German journalist and blogger from London.

Lana Valanche a singer song writer from Southhampton.

Yessenia Khouri a student of Islamic studies at UCL.

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When a group of strangers start having a set of recuring dreams about two couples that happen to be each others doppelgänger’s, a cruel game of chance and fate will unite them, and ultimately they will decide the iminant death or blissful happiness of one the couples.

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On September the 9th 2009 a couple will die. Their fate lies in the
hands of a group of nine strangers that will risk life and in some
cases limb to keep them apart. The Nine, from unrelated backgrounds
begin having recurring dreams about Jessica Ashworth and Tim Bisley a
twenty-something couple from London, and their doppelgänger couple
Rachel Jones and David Farnham of similar age. The Nine will attempt
to prevent them from meeting, as they struggle to workout what the
dreams mean. Each of the nine witnesses a fantastical fatality. Each
has a chance to prevent them from meeting, but its only when they come
together in London, that they realise their dreams have been fragments
of an overall scene that is about to unfold, as slowly the fragments
and events of their dreams begin to occur in real time and they have one
final chance to play god. On September the 9th 2009 a couple will die.

Would you trust your life, to nine strangers?

Would you kill true love to spare an undeserved romance?

11
Oct
09

Dakota Project Pt 1

The first notes about The Dakota Project:

Scientist creates experimental brain drug.

Drug with similar name confused for brain drug.

Drug accidentally administered to children.

Children begin to slowly develop a number of reactions and symptoms as a biproduct of ingesting the drug.

Hormonal defects and chemical balance cause rapid aging.

A government decree is sent out stating all children are to be rounded up and put into prison camps nationwide.

Flashes of news casts children being ripped away from their parents, forced in their thousands into busses lorries and on to trains.

The overwhelming misery and sadness ring out in the children’s cries.

Newspaper runs headline:
“Human Rights Movement Compares Government Actions To The Treatment of The Jews.”

All transport is grounded. The country is on lockdown.

Protests outside the prison housing Professor Dakota.

They begin to grow weak, their skin whitens. Diseased and frail they barely eat. Hazmat suits worn by any whom come into contact with them.

Newspapers brand the children as “Zombies”.

Then one day across the country they all stop stock still, children nationwide collapse on the ground motionless.

Cameras watch them day and night every news channel waits with baited breath to break the news.

They awaken panic stricken and violetly lash out at everything around them. A complete Devolution of social normality, canibalism becomes rife in the camps.

Protests outside the prison housing Professor Dakota, intensifies and he is released to find a cure.

Children become reliant on primal instincts and begin to work in packs.

Their distorted blood drenched bodies begin to crave. The innocence drains from their eyes replaced with deathless stares.

The children escape and devour the gaurds at compounds across the country.

The country descends into chaos. Martial law breaks out as vast swaythes of people become infected.

People storm hospitals and medicals centres across the country in search of vaccines and temorary cures.

08
Oct
09

Note To Self

Note to self look up these books from John’s lecture.

Psychology for screenwriters
- William Bindicr

Transformational Arc

Robert McKee’s Story Model

The Art of Dramatic Writing

30
Sep
09

Frederica Road

The Frederica Four
Left to right: Chris, Lou, Gromps and Me

Moving in and birthdays, good times.




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