20
Feb
10

Black Jacket (Visual Writing, Chase Sequence)

Heart racing.

Blood dripping

Men chasing.

Clothing ripped

Street lights beaming

Shadows stretching

Black jacket man on the run.

Scuffling shoes,

Snap decision.

Badly timed.

Head lights dazzle.

Tires screaching

Sheilding eyes.

Sudden hault

Impatient horns

Angry shouts

Breathing hard

Men chasing.

Turning.

Facing.

“There he is”

“He’s in the road”

Stairs ahead.

Bridge above.

Black jacket surges on.

Black jacket man.

Heart racing.

Scuffling shoes on metal steps.

Looking.

Leeping.

Fingers grasping.

Pulling up onto the ledge.

Wind howling.

Chasers scowling.

Out of reach black Jacket stands.

Climbing slowly.

Chasers follow.

Cold and hollow, black jacket waits.

Standing.

Waiting.

Hesitating.

All three upon the roof top stand.

Arms raising.

Speaking softly.

Arms out stretched.

“Forgive me please”

Leaning backwards.

Men run forward.

Black jacket falls.

The men look over

Black jacket falls

Eyes of horror

Black jacket.

Black jacket

Red stains.

Cracked tarmac

Crimson blood

Cracked skull

Life ending

People screaming

Tears streaming

Cars gather

Traffic haults.

Black jacket lifeless

Black jack young

Black jacket

Black jacket

Black jacket gone

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